
Spring was our favourite season,
but all that changed with a reason
Winter has never been so long;
for u, my sunshine, are gone
waking up is something i detest,
only in dreams i never protest
for my head says you are dead,
but my heart approves it's instead
who said only humans err,
God's made a blunder here!
He ordered one life depart,
And made two souls live apart
Never have i felt so crippled
though my limbs never even toddled
Like a bird missing its wings mid-air
without you, my life is hung in despair….
Wow.... nice strong emotional words all over...
ReplyDeleteGreat starter Kumar... :)
Keep it going !! Good luck !!
soooper DM... Aanaa yaen ivvalavu feelings? :(
ReplyDeletewrote this for chn ink .. 3 yrs back
ReplyDeletefeelings-lam onnum illa..based on a hindi pop song.
badly wanted to post somethin in chn ink then!
GOOD ONE!!but romba feel panni ezhthina madri iruku... keep gng...
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